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Discussion: The review process
Jan, I agree with you on this one, though I do have some reservations. On one hand, it seems mercenary and self-congratulatory to direct family and friends (or, in my case, students and colleagues) to our manuscripts. On the other hand, how are we supposed to get enough reviewers to reach our 100-point goal? It's very frustrating! There are currently 447 members of this site, yet I have received only 13 reviews of my excerpt. This makes me wonder if I will ever be able to reach the 100-point mark. I can't get points without reviewers, and I can't force people to review my work if they don't want to.
What I'd like to suggest is that the editors require members who have active submissions to review at least 5 submissions per two-weeks in order for their submissions to remain active. Also, those who belong to the site must review one excerpt per month in order to remain a member of the site.
What do you think about this?
Thanks for bringing up this topic, Jan. I enjoy reading your work.
Sincerely, Christinec
I think your idea is a good one. Yes, reaching 100 points even for a submission that has received very positive reviews seems impossible. I've had YOU'RE SO VAIN...on the site for well over six months and even though most of the reviews have been encouraging, only 19 people have reviewed it so far. So actually, your getting 13 in such a short time is quite good. I'm the typical writer who lives a rather solitary life. I don't have tons of friends, so I have to depend on the members of this site. Usually, what happens is that friends of a particular writer will join just to review that writer's submission. Once they've done that, they rarely return. Anyway, good luck to you, Christinec. You are definitely talented.
Jan's active submissions:
STALKING YOLANDA (revised),
How to Get a Life
Hi! I am frustrated that I recently got a review for my excerpt where the reviewer says that she was "frustrated" because she wanted to know more about the characters and the meaning of the title, so that suggests to me that she (or he) is interested in the story, but she didn't give the excerpt a single star in any category. This isn't to say that I'm demanding to get a star; it's just that the written review didn't match up with the point system. Has this happened to anyone else? My concern is that, although the 0.0 points doesn't hurt my overall points, it does lower my overall average.
Thoughts, anyone? Sincerely, Christinec
First, I would like to express that I am in no way related to, a member of, or someone conjoined to the staff here. I'm just trying to provide an answer from the best of my own knowledge. With that said, I'll help as best I can. :)
Only the points count towards publishing. The star rating is meant to give an author a feel of how a person reacted to their story. If you have a 4.5 average in the premise category, then your story idea is really good. If however you have a 1.0 average in your writing category, then your writing might need some work.
Unfortunately, the 0.0 grades can mess with your averages, distorting this self-view, but if you're like me, you look at each individual grade and would see a string of 0 stars as someone who didn't understand the review system.
The problem is exactly as Jan expresses it. Few writers stick around long. They come in with a full head of steam, review the recent works, then drop off the planet when they realize the process takes forever.
Is 100 too high of a bar? The recent debacle says no, as Long Tale would have been stuck publishing a novel because someone had a lot of friends willing to log in - and my eyes detected that there might have been multiple logins from the same person.
The problem lies in the fact that no one is doing any serious reviewing of each others work. I admit, I hung in for quite a while, reviewing everyone, before finally giving up. There just aren't enough living souls around here to keep the pot stirred, which means we are in need of an incentive program to keep people reviewing.
The old ... you got to give reviews to receive them ploy probably wouldn't work well, as then members would feel compelled to give flowery reviews with the hope of receiving the same in return, and this would lead to inflated scores.
However, I do have an idea ... The front page shows the last couple of stories posted. As a rule, these get the reviews from each new member. So ... Why not pepper into that list the stories of the top three reviewers? No one would be forced to perform reviews, but there would be an incentive for doing so. As it stands, the current list directs the focus to new authors, taking it away from them as others join. I think this is the biggest reason why many authors are stuck around 10 points, as by then they become part of the forgotten.
Those who want to provide reviews would get more visibility, but that improved visibility would not guarantee them more points - just a better chance at more reviews.
The biggest problem with the current system is that it depends on independent readers to come in, read the beginning of a story, and then vote on it. Consider the reader's point of view. If they have no invested interest in any of the authors, then what's in it for them? Say they are just curious and read a really good book ... do they get to read on? Afraid not, and that's a good thing, as none of us would want more than an excerpt in public domain.
Therefore, it's left for the authors to decide who inevitably gets published, and lately, the authors are finding little reason to stick around. Me? I check in here and there hoping to see more activity, but I am inevitably disappointed. A shame, as I have revised my work several times and I think it's shaping up to be a great work. Many of the revisions came from responses I received here, but all in vain, as no one knew is left to review those changes. I'm certain others are in the same boat.
Fact is, I would love to see the greatest novel hit this site, then dare the excerpt to go it all the way. Even the won that did make it, did so because of support from a previous readership base. Not to say it wasn't justified to win - it was - but without that readership base, would it have had a chance? Only with more readers ...
I still do an eye for an eye - reviewing anyone who reviews me. If we all did the same, then things would flow much better. However, I can't ask others to come back knowing the discontent they left here with. It's left to the few remaining to find a way to path in the life needed to morph this exercise in futility to the possible testimony to a new way of authorship - and I fear there already might be too few candles to light the spark needed.
I feel awful for being the pessimist, but I was one of those authors who dove headfirst into this jello. The statement made was 'bring in your family and friends', but I would have none of that. Why? I want to be judged by my peers and my readers, so I know where I truly stand. I know grammy loves me and my friends think I write the best stuff. They love me, but I question how much of that is a testimony to any actual skill. Among my peers and readers I get the turth, and that's what I seek - for if I am ever to sell my book, I want it to be the one people are waiting for and not the one grammy and my friends look forward to so as to feed my shattered ego.
Jan, I have known you here for awhile, and I always knew you would remain on, as does Cloister, in the shadows. We're survivors, perhaps not knowledgeable enough to realize we languish in the belly of a beast. Still, I have a hope, and I know you do too. Perhaps our perseverance will pay off in the end. Until then, hope is all that remains...
The spoken lasts but a moment; the written lasts forever.
Yoshi: Wow! Thanks for your detailed and thoughtful analysis of the review process. I agree with you about the review process needing major revisions. Your point about the pitfalls of recruiting reviewers is well-taken. Unless the author really pushes her work (and has a willing pool of readers to push it to), there is little chance of her getting enough points to publish that work. Since I am a writing teacher, I have colleagues and students who are interested in reading my work (which I have already shared with them in lessons and writing groups). I've been surprised: they are not merely cheerleaders! They have provided me with some of the best feedback I've received! Although some just praise the work, those are rare. What I'm saying is that it can't hurt to ask others to read your work, although it would be better if those you select are avid readers and, ideally, writers. But this isn't always possible.
I love your point about the way submissions are organized on the site. It is such a great point, and one that I've been considering. The top 3 reviewers should be given some exposure. That's a great idea. I suggested above that those who have material on the site should be required to do reviews to keep their material on it. I submitted this comment to Jason, who said the logistics of that are difficult to monitor, but that it's possible to give the writer a longer period of review if they submit reviews. (Ex: your excerpt remains for 3 months; if you do more reviews, it can remain for an additional month). This solution, however, doesn't really solve the problem you mentioned above: more exposure for works that have been on the site for awhile and are now relegated to the bottom of the submissions pile.
The entire publishing process is so daunting, paricularly because it consumes time that I could spend writing and polishing my work. I've wanted to read more excerpts from this site, but I've been working like a fiend to revise my own work, raise a family, meet the responsibilities of my job... you get the point. The trend of the publishing industry, it seems, is that a writer is expected to not only write, but to also be a salesperson for his or her work. Two small publishing houses required me to submit a marketing plan with my chapters. It's all about self-promotion! I believe in my novel, so I'm willing to do that, but I'm frustrated by that process. I'm a writer, not an ad executive!
Thank you for your response, Yoshi. As with the reviews, the traffic in these forums is sparse and limited to those who really want answers and really have the desire to have their work read. I will read your excerpt for whatever it's worth. Maybe you'll read mine, too!
Sincerely, Chrisine
An eye for an eye - I always read those who read mine. :)
The spoken lasts but a moment; the written lasts forever.
I also had a friend review and his stars did not go in. He wrote Long Tale and asked if he could change somehow. Answer was no way. Zeros really kill an average!
Bldodson's active submissions:
Lost In Seattle
Does anyone from admin ever check these discussion boards? Or look at the reviews or keep tabs on what's going on on the site? I put up a question in another board, no answer on that yet...
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There is a fairly recent excerpt that has climbed the charts at break-neck speeds. I think you all know to which I'm referring. It wasn't awful, but it certainly wasn't amazing enough to receive all the five-star ratings that it did. For me, this is one of the drawbacks in Long Tale's review process--that so many of the reviews are by friends and family of the writer and therefore lack objectivity. Because of this, a very mediocre excerpt can earn 100 points quite quickly and easily.
Jan's active submissions:
STALKING YOLANDA (revised), How to Get a Life