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Use this thread to discuss the excerpt (K)Night School by Chaos_reigns.

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System over 3 years ago Posted on Oct 06, '08 at 04:44 PM

I just want everyone to know that i revamped (K)night School. Before it was written on a whim and had a lot of plot holes and wasn't as solid as i would have liked. It's a lot better now, and the characters are more firm, and not so shaky, please tell me what you think, i've only had a few reviews and they weren't so good, which is what prompted the revamp. If it's just bad anyways, let me know. I just want some sort of feedback so i can improve.

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Chaos_reigns over 3 years ago Posted on Oct 06, '08 at 08:35 PM

I think this version looks a lot better but you probably want to have someone go through it and find typos and stuff :).

Elspeth over 3 years ago Posted on Oct 06, '08 at 10:39 PM

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